Finally sliding into the next revision pass on The Way. And sliding is more accurate than jumping, at this point. It's a big chunk, and I have a major change decision I need to make. But first, consolidating feedback. In the man time, though, inspiration hit, and I have come up with a slight change to make the ending a lot more satisfying, without having to change the plot.

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